You've written your first draft. You've brought out the red
pen. Now what? If you're like a lot of beginning writers, you'll go through and
mark your spelling and grammar errors, maybe change a couple lines to something
even more brilliant. But what if your manuscript needs more? Are you asking,
"What more is there?"
Let's categorize edits into four types:
1. Plot revision.
Major overhaul. And perhaps one of the hardest because that means you have to
chop your baby up and duct tape it back together. Your best preparation for
this is to read plot books. Screen writing books can be your best friend here
because they completely ignore craft and focus solely on story. Apply what
you've learned by watching movies, reading books, plot-editing friend's
manuscripts, then finally plotting out your own ms (cards, charts, bullet
points). You have to step waaay back and objectively decide if all your plot
points lie in the right places. If you have an unshakable plot, the other stuff
will be much easier to play with.
2. Character revision.
If you've been getting feedback along the lines of, "I like the concept,
but I'm not connecting with your characters," you may need to concentrate
only on characters. Step back. If your main character is you, you may want to
step way, way, way back, as in start something new until you can analyze your
work dispassionately. Every character needs to be unique: in the way they
dress, talk, act, think. And each needs to be necessary to the plot. Take each
character and describe him or her—especially do this with your main
character—if he/she can only be described in cliché terms or by the things that
happen to him/her, you’ll need character revision. Each character needs quirks,
a way of speaking and thinking so that even readers with nothing in common can
relate.
3. Continuity.
This is more of a last edit and can be done by a critique or writing partner—many
beginning writers mistake this for the next edit they do after the first draft.
You can do it at the same time as other edits, but try breaking them down. For
continuity, check dialogue—do each of your characters have their own language
and stick to it—time lapses are coherent, plot points follow each other, names
and special words keep the same spelling, format, chapter numbers, etc, etc.
Dedicate a portion of this edit to ensuring that every scene and every
character has their own arch.
4. Line, grammar,
spelling edits. Usually, the simplest edit. It also acts like blinders for
writers unused to editing—instead of focusing on the big stuff, the hard stuff,
the rip-out-your-heart stuff, writers concentrate only on this simple stuff.
You’re doing a disservice to yourself, and your writing/critique partners if
you keep your blinders on.
Editing takes just as much practice as writing. being able
to recognize and fix problems in other people’s work, and recognizing and
fixing problems in your own are two completely different things; skills that
take equal time to cultivate and master. The best advice you can take is to
step back, prepare yourself with how-to-guides, practice with friends, and
practice on yourself.
Vickie Motter is a literary agent with Andrea Hurst Literary
Management, based on the west coast. She acquires all genres of YA as well as
Adult Paranormal Romance and Urban Fantasy. Visit her blog Navigatingthe Slush Pile for more information and writing tips.
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